This is kinda old, but i guess at the time that a 2nd season wasn't coming, I decided to write it. Who knew that this teaser would be somewhat akin to the 1st episode of Traumend? LOL. Anyway, enjoy:
Rozen Maiden-Survivor's Guilt
A story by Jorge Antonio Rivera
Based on the characters created by Peach-Pit
Published in Japan by Getonsha Comics
Appearing in Monthly Birz Comics
Published in USA and Canada by Tokyopop
Rozen Maiden-Survivor's Guilt
(c)2006 Animecraft Entertainment
(c)2006 Peach-Pit
This is a work of fiction and it is fan made. It is not to be
published in any form, because in reality, I don't want to get sued.
Timeline:
A year has passed between the end of Shinku's and Suigintou's confrontation.
Shinku has suffered nightmares concerning Suigintou, who she feels did not have to die
at her hands, but because of the Alice Game, she had to. This is her story and the story
that I hopefully will one day see animated as an OVA. More about Rozen Maiden, go here:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rozen_Maiden
Hopefully, there will be a 3rd season of this amazing series. Now, sit back and read this
in-between story between the original and Traumend. Constructive C&C is always welcome.
Rozen Maiden
Survivor's Guilt
Jun scoops up Shinku onto his right arm as soon as the others dolls appear to confront Suigintou.
Shinku is badly damaged, her left arm torn apart by Suigintou's attack, and as they run, Shinku looks
towards the other dolls and see Suigintou prepare to finish her attack. Jun, in his dream world has created
a lonely house on top of a small hill that overlooks his world, the darkened clouds that surrounded his heart
slowly breaking away to reveal sunlight drifting down. They make it inside, and puts Shinku down on the small
brown sofa, ready to fix her. She turns around towards the door and sees Suiseiseki's, Souseiseki's and Hina Ichigo's
heads rolling towards her. Her deep blue eyes widened in terror as one of Suigintou's wings, now become a black dragon
pierces Jun from behind, and Shinku's Rosa Mystica breaks.
"Shinku, I will turn you to Junk"
"Shinku, why did you let me die?"
"Shinku, this is the price for not following the rules"
Suigintou slowly comes inside, her black lolita clothes torn asunder, her incomplete body burning with a deep blue flame.
Shinku just stares at her, and slowly she becomes engulfed in flames. She tries to scream, her lovely mouth
makes no sound as the flames ignite her red dress.
"Become like me, BECOME JUNK!!!" Suigintou laughs and laughs, maniacally, revealing her black soul, while
the rosa mysticas of the other dolls float inside her. Shinku reaches towards her and screams again, this time,
a loud horrifying sound finally escapes her. Suigintou just smiles.
A loud pop opens her sleeping quarters, also known as her suitcase. She appears shaken and frightened, and sweat or
what we could sweat appears on her, making her doll clothes wet. Slowly, she gets out, the moonlight streaming inside
Jun's bedroom window and for once, she doesn't know what to do.
The next morning, as the morning hijinks ensue between Suiseiseki and Hina-Ichigo roll around, Jun sees Shinku slowly
walking down the stairs. He pretends not to notice until Shinku hits Jun on the shin, hard with her shoes.
"OW~! What did you do that for?" Jun looks at Shinku, a glare that Shinku does not back down.
"You didn't make me tea this morning. Where's Nori?" She asks, her voice composed of aristocracy and being in charge.
"Why should I make you tea? I'm not your slave!" Jun shots back.
Shinku gets her cane and taps Jun on his ring finger. " This says otherwise. Now, please make me some tea." Shinju asks
politely, Jun grumbles and goes makes Shinku's tea. Hina-Ichigo walks towards Jun and pulls gently on his pants.
" I want some Unyuu, and Nori's Hana Hamburger" She cutely asks.
"Chibi-Ningen! I want cookies and make my tea not lukewarm, desu." Suiseiseki demands, her voice bratty and making sure
Jun listens.
"Hai, Hai" Jun replies with a hint of annoyance on his voice. He makes the dolls breakfasts and gives to the dolls while he
goes back up to his room to study. They eat their meal in silence, until Hina-Ichigo asks Shinku about the noise in the
room last night. " What happened, nano?" Shinku does not look at her when Hina asks the question. Suiseiseki looks at Hina and
then to Shinku.
"Nothing" She replies.
Hina looks confused, but Suiseiseki looks at Shinku worried.
"You had a bad dream, Shinku?" Suiseiseki asks.
"No dreams. I don't dream." Shinku replies, her voice flat.
"Why are you lying to us?" Sui-chan asks again.
"I'm not lying. I don't dream." For the 1st time, Shinku's voice hints annoyance and is slowly, her composure and calm is breaking.
"I'm going back up to the room to be with Jun. I want you guys to drop this subject." She gets down from the table and walks towards the
stairs. Suiseiseki and Hina-Ichigo just look at her strangely, most of all with a hint of worriedness on their faces. The day rolls around,
with the dolls doing their usual routine. Hina-Ichigo and Suiseiseki watch Detective Kun-Kun on the TV when Shinku comes back down the stairs and
walks towards the closet, where the mirror to the N-Field is being stored. The dolls slowly follow her and as soon as Shinku walks in,
Hina and Suiseiseki stop near the entrance.
"I didn't mean to let you die. You are and always be my sister, Suigintou. I didn't want to fight you, but I had no choice." Shinku paces in front of the
mirror and whispers to it. "Why did Father made us for this purpose?" Shinku's eyes water. Hina and Suiseiseki step out of the side of the door
and walks towards her. Then Shinku tries to step into the mirror but can not. Hina's foot cracks over a wooden piece of floor and Shinku turns around.
Suiseiseki grabs Hina and they fall towards a memory box. Shinku walks pasts them, her elegance and grace composed once more.
"The same dream, The same nightmare." Shinku hears Suigintou's voice in her dream world while she's sipping her tea. Shinku looks at her
and then Suigintou becomes engulfed in flames.
"I WILL TURN YOU TO JUNK, SUFFER THIS DREAM UNTIL I RETURN. MAKING APOLOGIES TO THE MIRROR WON'T CALM MY IMPERFECT SOUL!!!"
Shinku looks in horror as the tea cup falls and breaks, spilling the tea. She turns away.
"Shinku, Shinku, Shinku, Shinku" The chant from Suigintou's lips take an eerie tone. Shinku turns to her and sees nothing, only the tattered
remains of Suigintou's clothing. She picks it up with her hand and holds it to her chest.
"I'm sorry, I'm really sorry" She breaks down, her blue eyes shedding tears of grief.
Hina-Ichigo hears the muffled sobs and wakes up. She opens her suitcase, crawls out and goes over to Shinku's briefcase. She opens it
and sees tears flowing from Shinku's closed eyes. She walks into Shinku's case and slowly picks up her head and puts her on her lap.
Then she turns to the window and sees a black feather floating down in the pale moonlight.
"She lives?"
Tuesday, August 5, 2008
No more on Hiatus, might as well use this for something...
Well, I decided to cancel the hiatus on this blog now. Might as well use it for something right? I guess I'll kick it off with a Sailor Saturn Tribute Poem that I wrote years ago. Hope you guys like what you see.
Child of Destruction
By Jorge Antonio Rivera
Child, Born out of science,
Child, Born out of love,
Body held by evil impatience,
Child's future without hope
An accident claimed Mother's life
Her father's future, held by strife,
Pact with the devil has been made,
Evil monster, Father creates
Child found out of power she held
For her, friends she tried to make,
Rejection fueled the hatred,
Evil entity made her classmates pay for the ultimate mistake
Loneliness soon claimed her,
Vil entity held her hostage, being filled with hate,
Fueled by darkness, it consumed her
And soon, overthrown was her fate.
Finally, she made a friend,
One who loved and cared for her,
Evil entity became afraid
Her heart split with hope and fear
Her sickness did not stop her,
Her strange powers, did not make her new friend scared,
Fate had other plans for her,
And then the entity reared it's ugly head
Soon, she lost control,
Grabbing her friend's pure heart crystal,
Her soul was torn in two,
Soon the evil entity took control
Her friend's life hung in the balance,
The past princess and future queen was distraught
The future royal court in disarray,
Her father joined her in her palace, now transformed,
The consequences of her actions, she not thought
The world soon would be dark and grey
She became an evil mistress, served only to serve the master,
Power and Hatred fueled her, wanting the holy grail,
She held complete control of her father,
She was no longer weak and frail
The future queen launched an assault,
The future royal court joined the queen,
They came to seek her, the queen to save her,
That was the queen's biggest fault
Her father became a monster,
Her soul saw this,
Soon, she was torn in two,
Light and Darkness fought,
Then there were no more Death Busters.
The Evil person she became struggled,
and soon was filled with the evil master's power,
Her soul returned what was her friend's heart,
Her friend awakened, and was sad,
She disappeared into the light, her friendship torn apart.
Soon , inside of her, she heard a voice,
The evil mistress became aware of this,
"A stronger you resides within me",it said
The Evil Mistress took notice,
and then she disappeared, dark became light.
The symbol appeared, the unmistakeable power was unleashed,
Mistress Nine was no more,
The future queen and her royale court saw what happened,
They all became shocked,
For the one who must not awakened has appeared,
The Talismans summoned her, the world was about to end.
She became the Senshi of Death and Ruin,
Her only job, to destroy the Mistress Master,
She shouted a magical phrase and the creature consumed it,
And as the Royal Court watched along with the King and Queen,
She brought down her silence glaive
The creature was destroyed and was sealed, along with her,
Pluto closed the time gate, sadness filled her within her,
And as the Future Queen revived everyone that was killed,
Her future daughter heard a cry of want and be loved,
Soon, they all saw what was there,
The soldier of death and ruin was reborn,
an an infant, the outers took her,
The child of destruction was here, forevermore.
End Of The Kingdon-A Sailor Moon Poem
Written by Setsuna Meioh, Translated by Jorge A. Rivera
I stood there, watching
I stood there, disbelief
I stood there, despairing
I stood there, no sight of relief
The princess murdered,
the princess crying,
Jealousy raged,
Peasant woman, full of hatred,
Peasant woman, laughing,
The princess caged
The queen was hysterical,
The queen searching,
The prince, composure destroyed,
Peasant woman, jealousy made her hysterical,
Consequence Far-Reaching,
The prince fell, love longing,
The queen became unthroned
My talisman awoke,
Neptune and Uranus watched,
I was distraught
Their talismans awoke,
Our hearts ached,
The summoning began,
Our hopes crushed
3 talismans waving in the air,
light shone, 3 beams were sent,
Destiny on that day, was unfair,
This was the day to repent
I stood there, filled with sadness,
The soldier of silence and ruin awoke,
Saturn cast a shadow on the kingdom,
The peasant woman, filled with madness,
The peasant woman was struck,
The queen saw in the distance,
and Realized,
The end of the Kingdom
Saturn was summoned,
The grim reaper was here,
The queen was shocked,
her pure heart filled with the blackest fear
Saturn appeared before the queen,
The bodies of her daughter, her prince,
were scattered,
Her last bit of strength, she sent them,
And this was the end of her reign,
They were sent to the future,
The glaive came down,
The queen smiled, tears of happiness fell,
This was her rapture,
and the moon kingdom was gone
The Silver Millenium came to an end,
Sailor Saturn, the queen thanks you,
a bright light appeared,
The future was saved by you.
Child of Destruction
By Jorge Antonio Rivera
Child, Born out of science,
Child, Born out of love,
Body held by evil impatience,
Child's future without hope
An accident claimed Mother's life
Her father's future, held by strife,
Pact with the devil has been made,
Evil monster, Father creates
Child found out of power she held
For her, friends she tried to make,
Rejection fueled the hatred,
Evil entity made her classmates pay for the ultimate mistake
Loneliness soon claimed her,
Vil entity held her hostage, being filled with hate,
Fueled by darkness, it consumed her
And soon, overthrown was her fate.
Finally, she made a friend,
One who loved and cared for her,
Evil entity became afraid
Her heart split with hope and fear
Her sickness did not stop her,
Her strange powers, did not make her new friend scared,
Fate had other plans for her,
And then the entity reared it's ugly head
Soon, she lost control,
Grabbing her friend's pure heart crystal,
Her soul was torn in two,
Soon the evil entity took control
Her friend's life hung in the balance,
The past princess and future queen was distraught
The future royal court in disarray,
Her father joined her in her palace, now transformed,
The consequences of her actions, she not thought
The world soon would be dark and grey
She became an evil mistress, served only to serve the master,
Power and Hatred fueled her, wanting the holy grail,
She held complete control of her father,
She was no longer weak and frail
The future queen launched an assault,
The future royal court joined the queen,
They came to seek her, the queen to save her,
That was the queen's biggest fault
Her father became a monster,
Her soul saw this,
Soon, she was torn in two,
Light and Darkness fought,
Then there were no more Death Busters.
The Evil person she became struggled,
and soon was filled with the evil master's power,
Her soul returned what was her friend's heart,
Her friend awakened, and was sad,
She disappeared into the light, her friendship torn apart.
Soon , inside of her, she heard a voice,
The evil mistress became aware of this,
"A stronger you resides within me",it said
The Evil Mistress took notice,
and then she disappeared, dark became light.
The symbol appeared, the unmistakeable power was unleashed,
Mistress Nine was no more,
The future queen and her royale court saw what happened,
They all became shocked,
For the one who must not awakened has appeared,
The Talismans summoned her, the world was about to end.
She became the Senshi of Death and Ruin,
Her only job, to destroy the Mistress Master,
She shouted a magical phrase and the creature consumed it,
And as the Royal Court watched along with the King and Queen,
She brought down her silence glaive
The creature was destroyed and was sealed, along with her,
Pluto closed the time gate, sadness filled her within her,
And as the Future Queen revived everyone that was killed,
Her future daughter heard a cry of want and be loved,
Soon, they all saw what was there,
The soldier of death and ruin was reborn,
an an infant, the outers took her,
The child of destruction was here, forevermore.
End Of The Kingdon-A Sailor Moon Poem
Written by Setsuna Meioh, Translated by Jorge A. Rivera
I stood there, watching
I stood there, disbelief
I stood there, despairing
I stood there, no sight of relief
The princess murdered,
the princess crying,
Jealousy raged,
Peasant woman, full of hatred,
Peasant woman, laughing,
The princess caged
The queen was hysterical,
The queen searching,
The prince, composure destroyed,
Peasant woman, jealousy made her hysterical,
Consequence Far-Reaching,
The prince fell, love longing,
The queen became unthroned
My talisman awoke,
Neptune and Uranus watched,
I was distraught
Their talismans awoke,
Our hearts ached,
The summoning began,
Our hopes crushed
3 talismans waving in the air,
light shone, 3 beams were sent,
Destiny on that day, was unfair,
This was the day to repent
I stood there, filled with sadness,
The soldier of silence and ruin awoke,
Saturn cast a shadow on the kingdom,
The peasant woman, filled with madness,
The peasant woman was struck,
The queen saw in the distance,
and Realized,
The end of the Kingdom
Saturn was summoned,
The grim reaper was here,
The queen was shocked,
her pure heart filled with the blackest fear
Saturn appeared before the queen,
The bodies of her daughter, her prince,
were scattered,
Her last bit of strength, she sent them,
And this was the end of her reign,
They were sent to the future,
The glaive came down,
The queen smiled, tears of happiness fell,
This was her rapture,
and the moon kingdom was gone
The Silver Millenium came to an end,
Sailor Saturn, the queen thanks you,
a bright light appeared,
The future was saved by you.
Thursday, May 1, 2008
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